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100WC#31 Bobby .R

Once upon a time, before the sun rose, there were three turtles wanting to pass the coral to get some jelly fish. However behind that was a horrible, sharp toothed shark who was huge and would gobble you up in one gigantic snap of his jaw. So the first turtle swam and swam until a deep voice said “If you come over here you will not be alive! You will be gone in five.” As a result the turtle zoomed off before the shark could move a fishy bone.

Then the second turtle swam and swam until a deep voice said “If you come over you will not be alive! You will be gone in five.” So the turtle zoomed off before the shark could move a fishy bone.

Then the third turtle swam and swam until a deep voice said “If you come over you will not be alive!You will be gone in five.” That turtle also zoomed off before the shark could move a fishy bone.

 



2 comments ↓

  • #   Charlie and Chanelle on 05.15.15 at 2:19 pm     Reply

    Great writing it’s amazing


  • #   Rory on 07.14.15 at 2:44 pm     Reply

    well done Bobby that was a fantastic piece of work.


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